You're too harsh mate. I actually think that it looks pretty good, and I'm looking forward to seeing her appearance in Red Lane! And BTW, you put this in multiple groups. Is there some way to quickly put a deviation in a bunch of groups at the same time? Just curious, because I don't know if you can, lolz.
She has already appeared in the first 2 pages of the comic. I have them posted in my gallery. You can either go to each group's page and add the daviation with the Submit option. or you can do it directly from the deviation's page. Just press the "Submit to Group" button and write the name of the groups that you want to submit the deviation to.