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"What am I ?"



A sort of request-gift art for :iconritusthemarlfox: who is writting a story about S-223 a cloned fox. Go and read his story now.... :iconnaoplz:

He gave me the freedom to improvise a little with the character so I made some markings at the muzzle, at the tail and at the start of the black fur at his feet and hands (visible at the other clone in the water tank), just to give him a more unique appearence :D

I really like how the "Emlar" logo came out :XD:

Did many experimentations with the lighting here and I really worked hard to deliver a more "dark" artwork. Hope you like it :)

Inspired by The Matrix and Underworld; Awakening.

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Art © MikLiak-Cevelt
S-223 © RitusTheMarlFox
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I love the concept and the dark atmosphere in this. The glowing effect on the containment is a nice touch as well as the pose the fox outside has, Shows his emotions in his movement as well as his expression. However there are a couple little things you could fix. The left hand looks slightly a bit off size wise to the arm, the lower part of the arm tapers into the hand a bit too quickly, so I would suggest shortening the upper arm because it's a bit too long compared to the lower side. Also, even when the fingers are curled up into a fist, you want to show a bit more fingers.
The eye on the left is just a teeny bit smaller than the other, And the feet are a bit too small. Just make the hind legs a bit bigger and it will look more balanced out. And the way the outlining is near the ears, you might want to put some tufts to make the ears look a bit more like they are part of him because it looks like it's just kinda pasted there under his cheek fur. XD Can be fixed easily though.

As for the side rating:
Vision: at 4 stars because the colors work well together and frame the main subject. The atmosphere also fits the situation

Originality: At 4 stars. Honestly I see many fox characters but because you included a background that tells a story then it shows it's your character, I've never seen a fox character that had a clone really. (or at least that is what I think is happening)

Technique: 4 and a half stars. Because there are some anatomy problems here and there but that is really the only thing that is wrong with the pic. Anatomy is hard to do though so it's fine if it's not perfect all the time. On the upside, The digital work is great. You did a good job blending the colors for the glowing effect and the highlights and shading work very goods with one another, it isn't just randomly thrown everywhere, it makes sense.

Impact: Well, I would not say it's really on the side of impact, it's a calm, kind of dark and mysterious, kinda leaves the viewer wondering who or what the fox in the tube has to do with the one outside. The atmosphere and colors are really the "impact" here. Not the drawing itself.

Anyways, great work overall <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>